Jul 11th 2007
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Ok, my voice is still scratchy cause I dont have a good mic so please look past that. ^ ^;;
I was just playing around and thought of this. I really love to sing and write lyrics. Its one of my dreams. ^ ^
Its un-edited and Im talking at the end. Im like in need ot some serious sleep cause I havent been to bed at all pretty much. v ... v;; Bad, I know. But it is what sometimes fuels me to write and sing. So, I hope you like this and ignore how annoying my voice is. I mind you that this is only the chorus. Im just throwing things out in the open.
Chorus:
I just wanna get mad
Throw myself to the floor
just kick and scream.
Waist my energy on nothing at all
To let everything go.
Lyrics by Me
Voice is Me
Comments
Sanchu Says:
Buru Gin Kasai Says:
Wow, that's really nice, you have a great voice, if you want we could work on a composition together so you can make a nice starter track. Of course neither of us are professional it would be a good way to get people to notice you. Anytime you want, just let me know. Course this coming from a bored genius, sounds fishy?
Okay I'm done talking now I should go to bed tiredness making me insane...er... You sound great! ^o^ 
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DemonRuki Says:
roommate:that high note at the end of the first four phrases is very ambitious, and I won't say it's without merit. it's certainly unorthodox; you could probably pull it off, you've a lovely voice, but in my opinion you need to commit more to that note (make it a major part of your phrase) as opposed to making it a sort of after-thought-squeek (the way it is now). instead of ahh ahh ahh uh! it needs to focus more on that last note, like ahh ahh ahh uhhh~
your voice is beautiful, and the scale is very interesting - reminds me of hmm some kind of ethnic music, but I can't put my finger on what. anyway, keep working on it! =3
oryx
DemonRuki Says:
oh @.@ yeah my roommate stole my comment babe
hmpf
but anyways ^ ^ i loved it your voice is so cute and i can't wait to hear the whole song
it's gonna be awesome and your gonna be rich :3