This is for

's contest...the theme was 'balloon' and my mind immediately whizzed to the song 99 Red Balloons by Goldfinger (awesome lyrics, by the way). So...yeah. This was inspired by those lyrics.
The preview pic was a quick wierd thing done on Crayola.
Comments
elle Says:
Great story imagery in here--those first two stanzas had a great happy atmosphere, and then it tuned down to sad, and maybe a bit nonchalant. I liked the ebb and flow.
HolyCheesecakes Says:
very beautiful poem
reminds me of the song. (sings 99 Red Ballons) the rhyming is very smooth and the last stanza just got me
great job!!!
moodylynn Says:
the lyrics work so well i want to sing it
*sings*
AngelsWing Says:
Thank you for depressing Natalie's Day
Please leave a message after the tone:
*BEEP*
I'm sorry, your session is over, please make another appointment with the receptionist on the way out....
Der Sensenmann Says:
D'aww. Very sweet.
There were a couple of lines where you could've worded better, i.e. "And tied tight the balloon to my wrist
" could have been "And tied the balloon tight to my wrist" to produce a better flow.
Over all, very nice, and good job with the rhyming.
martysexylegs Says:
aww i love it and it is very humbling to me that is- and i would so buy her another red balloon
Shutaboy Says:
You did this when you were in a good mood?
yumeri29 Says:
what a poem... this is one of the great poems that i've been amaze and feel the essence of the message of the writer.. ^^
SapphireLimeLight99 Says:
I love it.

My name on most websites is 99luftbalons, based off the original song by Nena.
iayujay Says:
Oh! Finally, FINALLY, a poem worth front page.
Anyhow. This is such a sweet, sad little poem.