The title of this poem is actually called Thinking of winter while I’m stuck in an everlasting summer (the reason why it says summe is because I guess there was no more room for it to fit)
This is a poem I wrote while I was in Columbus. I had a lot of Sh** on my mind. Memories were just haunting me and the worst thing about it all is I had a dream about what I was thinking, it was really all overwelming, but in the end I learned some things from it. I just felt as if I should express this feeling to get it out of my mind and let it flow out of my head onto the paper. But, anyways.. I really love the title of it. Infact, I'm obsessed with it because it basically explains the poem in the way I was thinking when I wrote it.
Comments
SilverShadowBlade Says:
I'll never get used to you cursing or writing love stuff...DX
But good poem :3
BEUATIFUL. I still love you style of writing! How simple your rythms flow into the next line or the same one..X3 this was a peice to read..I like this one ALOT!..I think your real talent is poetry..you've really got something going here! Gosh,your inspiring em to wright some snuff now..X3...I think I wanna request a poem..BUT usually poems take that feeling in order to wright it..I'm so stupid ignore me....-hides but faves-
cellieruru Says:
It's extremely hard to do an AABBCCDD... rhythm, but you pulled it off wonderfully. ^-^ Beautiful.
TheSoulSeekers Says:
Damn These This always happens ----->
Yuna Uisce Says:
Beautiful job. All of your poetry is full of depth.
Nishi Chan Says:
that was wonderful
it made tears form in my eyes......
your poem has a lot of meaning.....
the way you express your self is so impressive.....keep up
the great and wonderful work
Ozzyturtle123 Says:
I really can relate to this poem. Great job!
xlivexthexmomentx Says:
wow this poem is really good.
its like exactly wat im going through now.
great job =]