Our Love

Our Love

This love I just can’t define
Because it simply falls out of my mind
When I wake up it’s always there
All around me even in the air
Is it true or is it make believe?
Why can’t I truly see?
When we look into each other eyes
I feel incredibly good inside
When we begin to kiss and our lips touch
I start to think how I love you so much
And every time we see each other
I know there could never be another
Now waiting to see you again
Thinking to myself how long has it been

Description

Jun 22nd 2007
Tags:
free free verse happy happy romance romance sensual sensual verse
Views:
48
Comments:
11
Score:
disabled
Favorites:
6
Older Poem I made



Hope you all like it

Comments

littlexprincessx Says:

i see dat pic br foor

Rapture HalfaFoxgirl Says:

this is cute ;3 -faves-

yumeri29 Says:

hmmm... good rythm... but i think your poem is not yet finish...

TheSoulSeekers Says:

TT_TT god why do i always cry ?! lmfao >_<

monicachaloupka Says:

wow this is really beautiful^^

SolarIcarus Says:

Very nice. I try and write poems but I really suck compared to this lol.

SilverShadowBlade Says:

My lil Al's growin up...DX

Phaena Says:

Very nice, simple yet the word selection allows it to express its point.

emochic92 Says:

wow i love it it is wesome FAVE

Yuna Uisce Says:

Older poems are just as special as new ones!