this is beautiful and sad its a great poem^^
That kicked ultimate ass!! *favs*
O_O ITS ON FRONT PAGE!!! *claps*
So sad...I love it
Nice flow and all, but you need to credit the preview picture. Refer to this for help on how and why. Keep up the good poetry otherwise ^^
mean people are no-ing this WHY!!
that is so beautiful! so sad, but so endearing. simply lovely!
Wow,this is pretty!
Happy Birthday, Jeremysangel-san!
I like this poem, but you can better OR say for every 18 just 18 OR say for every 18 just eighteen. Sorry for the worthless explanaition, but my English is far from perfect.
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monicachaloupka Says:
this is beautiful and sad its a great poem^^
sorachain Says:
That kicked ultimate ass!! *favs*
sorachain Says:
O_O ITS ON FRONT PAGE!!! *claps*
DarkZelda13 Says:
So sad...I love it
Snakefire Says:
Nice flow and all, but you need to credit the preview picture. Refer to this for help on how and why. Keep up the good poetry otherwise ^^
sorachain Says:
mean people are no-ing this WHY!!
HolyCheesecakes Says:
that is so beautiful!
so sad, but so endearing. simply lovely!
CuteGoth12 Says:
Wow,this is pretty!
ebabe227 Says:
Happy Birthday, Jeremysangel-san!
Smiling Devil Says:
I like this poem, but you can better OR say for every 18 just 18 OR say for every 18 just eighteen. Sorry for the worthless explanaition, but my English is far from perfect
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