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Long ago...
Yup, so this is how it began
Before destroying this young man
Apathetic displays of affection
Correction for yuou they were never perfection
Distincly I remember
When it started going under
Thoughts reach the breaking point
It was only you left to dissapoint
But now that its over
I look over my shoulder
See my boy, his gift, his happiness
Wrong clearly the world on his back
Loosing track, cut him some slack
Mind screaming he isn't worth it
Well maybe I thought he deserved it
God's prayer infects the soul
My heart, maybe it's a start
Forgive, forget move on
It's a picture life has drawn
Soon the mist lifts
What's left of it
Just some old shit
Naw, it's only me
Instead of who I used to be
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Comments
yumeri29 Says:
Nice rythm! good job! ^^
HolyCheesecakes Says:
great rhyme scheme! great poem, wonderful emotion. (there are a few typos :) --> yuou = you, dissapoint = disappoint, loosing = losing) but other than that, great poem!
sorasgirlfriend Says:
that was beautiful*crys*lol
intence1 Says:
wow spongbob and Patrick controllers thats exclusive .. oh nice poem aswell(: