< 'Jobic Rocks <3' by StrawberryPanicked

Long ago...

Yup, so this is how it began
Before destroying this young man

Apathetic displays of affection
Correction for yuou they were never perfection

Distincly I remember
When it started going under

Thoughts reach the breaking point
It was only you left to dissapoint

But now that its over
I look over my shoulder

See my boy, his gift, his happiness

Wrong clearly the world on his back
Loosing track, cut him some slack

Mind screaming he isn't worth it
Well maybe I thought he deserved it

God's prayer infects the soul
My heart, maybe it's a start

Forgive, forget move on
It's a picture life has drawn

Soon the mist lifts
What's left of it
Just some old shit

Naw, it's only me
Instead of who I used to be

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Jun 15th 2007
Tags:
angst crazy emotion general lyric poem rap time transgressive urban youth
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What's this? I'm a rappin' foo'? I got my ghetto pass back? Word.

Comments

yumeri29 Says:

Nice rythm! good job! ^^

HolyCheesecakes Says:

great rhyme scheme! great poem, wonderful emotion. (there are a few typos :) --> yuou = you, dissapoint = disappoint, loosing = losing) but other than that, great poem!

sorasgirlfriend Says:

that was beautiful*crys*lol

intence1 Says:

wow spongbob and Patrick controllers thats exclusive .. oh nice poem aswell(: