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Phoenix
In the very very old times
When the world was a newborn child
The Phoenix flew in iridescent splendour -
Red and gold and feather-plumed.
The Sun shone down on flashing wing,
Saw red-shine glory, golden splendour,
And cried, “Phoenix, you are mine!
For as long as I burn, you shall shine!”
The Phoenix flew for one thousand years,
In crimson glory and gold-shine splendour.
But as the years wore on its strength died down –
Splendid no more, glorious no more, a shadow of its newborn self.
So the Phoenix flew from the Western desert,
To the East where the Sun goes down.
There, on a beach-tree’s nodding head,
It built a nest of sweet cinnamon bark,
Lined with heavy-scented myrrh.
And in the nest it sat, and sang,
“Sun, I am yours! Make me shine as you!”
The Sun heard the Phoenix’s cry,
Chased the clouds from the sky.
In golden glory the Sun shone out,
Filling the Phoenix with red-shine splendour,
‘Til it soared to the sky,
Wings spread in glorious renewal.
The Phoenix flew for one thousand years,
In crimson glory and gold-shine splendour.
But as the years wore on its strength died down –
Splendid no more, glorious no more, a shadow of its newborn self.
So the Phoenix flew from the Western desert,
To the East where the Sun goes down.
There, on a beach-tree’s nodding head,
It built a nest of sweet cinnamon bark,
Lined with heavy-scented myrrh.
And in the nest it sat, and sang,
“Sun, I am yours! Make me shine as you!”
The Sun heard the Phoenix’s cry,
Chased the clouds from the sky.
In golden glory the Sun shone out,
Filling the Phoenix with red-shine splendour,
‘Til it soared to the sky,
Wings spread in glorious renewal.
The Phoenix flew for one thousand years…
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Comments
Nanook Says:
Repetition usually bothers me, but this is the kind I enjoy.
It's very beautiful in its simplicity.
cellieruru Says:
I really don't usually like non-rhyming poems--what's the point?--but this rhymes in it's own way.
codyla Says:
wow you sure o like the word splendor dont you? ah well i liked it, with the repitition and what not...
Smiling Devil Says:
Congratulations with the frontpage.
TamashiiKitara123 Says:
this is beautiful. Congrats one making it to the front page! ^^