..::Desert Bride::..

by The masked ducky

in Completed Works

..::Desert Bride::..

It’s raining Monday evening
On the border of Colorado.
Desert sands blow hastilly,
Every animal here has a foe.

The veil of the tall slender bride,
Waves as the sand passes.
Born on the open range,
People come in masses.

She died here, bless her,
On the border of Colorado.
Fire did sweep out,
Every animal and foe.

Her body rests here,
Plans and trips, now aside.
The body of the resting beauty,
The corpse of the desert bride.
> 'Revamped Gunner ......@_@' by The masked ducky

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Jun 5th 2007
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bride free verse general nature
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Kinda got inspired from Kill Bill 1 & 2. I saw bits and pieces of it but i know how the story goes. I thought up of my own little scene with a bride out in the desert so i said........why not?

(c) Me

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Smiling Devil Says:

I really love this

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OmniX Says:

Born on the open range,
People come in masses.<<<<<<Bride is a renown attraction

Fire did sweep out, <<<<<Flame thrower?
Every animal and foe.


Alright poetry is not non-sense

But yea, it's poetic none the less hehe

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HolyCheesecakes Says:

very pretty it kinda reminds me of the Corpse Bride --- lol! you describe it all very well, but the third passage is a little rough --- nonetheless it is very pretty Great job!!

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