Life Is Worth Our While

by WonderingWisher

in Completed Works

Life Is Worth Our While

Life is worth our while

I just want to say
I know you had to go away
I know you want us to smile
Life is worth our while
It's all worth our while.

So then I got to thinking.
As my happiness was sinking.
Thought to tell you now.
Since I'm going down.
Do you know what to say?
When it doesn't feel like it's worth the wait.
Don't hate.
Life is worth our while.
It's all worth our while.

Singlehanded sours.
I want to end the showers.
Of the fleeting dying powers.
As my body hits the floor.
Heaven and Hell don't keep score.
Life is worth our while. For sure.
It's all worth our while.

Why not waste it?
No one asked for this.
Those enjoying it, are fakers.
Especially when you can't take it.
Life is worth our while.
Isn't it.
It's all worth our while.

Now let's go back.
You're not ready to stay young.
You're not ready to go along.
But you've got to keep strong.
Just keep pushing, will you get far?
But let's think about this,
maybe you're not ready for a final destiny.
Eternity of fear.
Eternity of tears.
Not yet ever knowing the other side to be.
Eternity of truth.
Eternity of Innocence.
Eternity of youth.
That's what heaven and hell are folks. Eternities of the destined.

So if, your not ready.
Where do you go?
The one place eternity doesn't show.
Life, my friend.
Just for you.
No one watching, make your move.
Your own style.
Before eternity catches up with you.
Run a mile.
Build a rock pile.
Find time to relax, unrile.
Your life is on dial.
After all this is you...
Life is worth your while.

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Jun 5th 2007
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angst critique experimental free verse is life our while worth
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Wow. So I was really bored during Math today. And this just came out on paper.

It started off more as a letter to a boy who died in my town. He was a friend of mine. And unfortunately he died young..So I suppose this time of year is when a lot of peopel who knew him try thier hardest to keep smiling. I wish it came out better...but then again. You can't stop the flow of words.

Comments

skittleschan Says:

This one is really good too... You really have so much talent.

HolyCheesecakes Says:

very pretty i love your style of poetry. you put so emotion into it. amazing-ness job!~

cjerd Says:

Amazing. I love your poems.