Take The Ones You Hate, For Instance

by WonderingWisher

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Take The Ones You Hate, For Instance

Take the ones you hate, for instance.
Take the ones you loathe.
They, themselves are worth the talk, a trait or two, or all.
That you cannot stand thier faults
In fact, thier are so many; you cannot see the good.
Perhaps thier insincere.
To quiet on thier own.
lonely little liars
Whining about a bad home.
Then, perhaps thier selfish.
To flip and flop thier looks.
Personaility changing with the World's folks.
Now notice, the shameful lack of trust.
Who knows how, or when or why.
Thier faith in humainity has died.
Then why in the world do they live?
Why do they survive.
They only live to criticize.
It's these people..
That we don't care, if they die.
If they stare
they could cry
they could joke
they could be poor
they could be broke.
It doesn't matter, who they are.
The ones you hate, leave thier scars.
That's just why you are who you are.
As these people chip away at your heart.

Take yourself, for instance
Thier are to many people, unique...
like you.
Look in the mirror, thier you'll see
All those people, thier problems
staring back at you...
Keep your distance.
State resistance.
Take the one you hate, for instance.
> 'Our Hearts Combined. For Skittleschan' by WonderingWisher

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Jun 5th 2007
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Alright. This is worth explaining. In this poem it's kinda deep. Normally I let you guys figure out what I mean. But I've decided to be nice today. Cause I was handing out punches and lollipops and I'm all out of punches. ^_~

Ha. Ha I crack myself up. Anyway...

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In this poem it starts off with listing all the ones you hate. More then likely traits about people you dislike. Yeah? Well, I'd have to say so. Lesseee...

-Selfish
-Snobby
-Mistrusting
-Liars
-Whiners

Pretty much every bad thing you can find in people. Yeah? Soooo what's the point, Aran? You might ask. Well here it is.

I then finish it off with: Take yourself for instance. Well, hons. What I mean is every trait listed above you spot in people. You may see someone pass by you on the street and I'll tell you right now at one point or another you've had at least one of those things you spot them acting out of too and I'd have to say that even though you turn your face away and roll your eyes those people, heh,

Well, I know it isn't funny when it happens to you.

This is what happens when I think to much.

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skittleschan Says:

I -LOVE- this one. Although it took me a minute to realize what it was saying. *slow*

cjerd Says:

This is one of my favorite poems of yours! :]