This is my first etude.... and after completing it... I'm not so sure if I want to learn it myself
. It's a really challenging piece. The technical ability of the right hand is in pretyy high demand, along with the left hand.
Mostly, I wrote this out of my love for you, Camichan. I hope you guys like it...
...and as always... I'll accept any criticism.
Comments
Camichan Says:
It sounds great!
I love it! I'm sorry for not having critiques in my comments ^__^;
Fox Amoore Says:
Hey man =) Sorry for the slow reply, i've been a little busy. Let's see... *listens*
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1) The general structure is nicely laid out, you've got a lot of nice ornaments in there, like the arpeggios, velocity switches, canons, not to mention the multiple time signature changes, very "Chopin/Liszt" in terms of representativity (which as you know, me being a technical player, is a plus for me
2) There was a couple of sections, notably so after 2:10 where the left hand seems louder and it doesn't seem to be taking control of the main melodies of the piece, I'm not sure if that was intentional?
3) Probably because it's done by midi(?), it's sounding a little Robotic, maybe to do with the way it's quantized by the PC or Sibilius? See if you can find a way to "loosen" the notes slightly, just *slightly*, like unquantize it randomly very slightly, so the notes are not completely perfect, it might flow a little more. See if you can do something with that
Great piece man, I enjoyed listening to it.