Love me or Love me not

by MonsteRockPunk

in Completed Works

Love me or Love me not

Love me or Love me not

If only you knew how I really felt
If only you had the eyes to see
Feelings of happiness can not be kept
As loneliness and depression fall upon me
I want to feel loved by you
If only you knew
Throughout it all were drifting apart I can feel this from the bottom of my already broken heart
Though I know you love me
I can tell by your voice
Will you choose me as a friend or lover?
It’s all down to your last choice
As tears drops fall along my face
More sadness starts to embrace
I love you so much
And all I need is your touch
So please hold me tonight
If you may or if you might
> 'Me as a Chibi' by MonsteRockPunk

Description

May 23rd 2007
Tags:
free free verse romance romance verse
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I wrote this when I had a lot of stress about something
thats been on my mind. I'm still actually stressing
over it and I actually cried about it becuase I had to
try and get my feelings out. Its making me
depressed and sad. I just haven't really been myself lately from all of it. I feel as if I'm alone.
I wish it were easier to talk about, but its to hard to
explain...

Comments

cellieruru Says:

*hugs* Aww, 'tis okay. ^-^;

monicachaloupka Says:

this is a great poem

farglefeezlebut Says:

(hugs) I hope things get better for you.

Please could you change your preview pic? I klnow that it could be a self-injury trigger for some people.

TheSoulSeekers Says:

*cries* omg thats so sad ! what the hell ?! but at the same time its oddly sweet i like it alot mind if i fav it its really beautiful

Neji Luver101 Says:

*hugs* I hope you really do feel better! If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll probably be here....

Rapture HalfaFoxgirl Says:

lovley, absolutly lovely. I know the feeling...

ebola Says:

emo

SilverShadowBlade Says:

Grr...I didn't want that face X3 -hug- :0

Lady Marmelade Says:

It`s wonderfull words for spelling this feeling...