May 23rd 2007
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escape
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I see my ex boyfriend all the time and it isn't much of an issue. Though sometimes those feelings I have for him pop up when I'm near him and I can't let those feelings take over me. Don't worry, I'm ok now. This was written maybe 2 weeks ago.
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Noburu Says:
I like the repetition in this one, between the repetition of certain words and the repetition of syntax structures. I thought it was awkward at first, but after I re-read it couple times I decided I like how it changes the topic; where escape goes from being a command to being the action of the first person.