Fire in a Rainstorm

by Just Cin

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Fire in a Rainstorm

My love for you is like a fire in the forest
Your love for me was like a flame
A flame in the middle of a rainstorm
A rainstorm of love that can never be
The water pounds on I; forcing it out of your life
Will it survive and grow?
Or is it forever lost?
Only time will tell…
Meanwhile
My fire keeps on burning
My fire of love and hope
All of it for you

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May 22nd 2007
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free verse rainstorm
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I also wrote this when I was getting over my ex. This one describes the break up a little bit. The break up really didn't make a whole lot of sense to me, but it's ok. We're really good friends now. I would take him back if he wanted me back, but right now, I'll just dream. *clouds overhead*

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Kori Says:

O.o You know, opposite genders tend to look really dumb at the end of a relationship. From any view.

It's easier to make a guy look dumb.