Okay, the distance between chest and head is two short, i know that. That screws up the rest of the anatomy, and makes her torso too small x___x her feet look too small because of the boots. The length of the feet should be the same as the distance between elbow and wrist. Her butt looks edgy x___x and it looks like the b is missing in Gamble. Okay now i'm done criticising xD just made for the fun xD
well, after this i'm doing a style-upgrade. I seriously need to!
Comments
yomiku Says:
i think she looks sooooooo fine 2 me :3
i love ur coloring ^^ keep it up
Merina Says:
Its actually pretty cool.
DiBlOvEr Says:
whoa that's very pretty!
forgottengeisha Says:
veary lovely
akukiri Says:
i like the way the wings were done ^.^
cjerd Says:
Awesome jobw tith the pose!
blue swan Says:
chibinarusegawa Says:
I think this looks great, you shouldn't be so hard on yourself about your art, it's gorgeous ^^ I really love the hair and your faces are beautiful^^ Your style is just so lovely ^^ Great work here
WieldtheKey Says:
I like how you draw noses. :) What do you mean by style upgrade?
Final Watch Says:
Wow you're so good at coloring!!