two thumbs up for you yo
I don't believe in fate... I dislike the idea of everything pre-planned.
this one too!
"Will nations be drowned by the frowns of the old While individuals are praised by the face of the young" ^ Favorite line. Very observant.
I like it very much^^, but you begon almost every sentence with will, I know that you can't start every line with will but it does sounds a bit weird. (If you understand what I mean )
Wow. That ws excelllent. e. It was well written and really, really well put together. It flowed nicly too. Godo work! ^^
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Pyrotactics Says:
two thumbs up for you yo
Tom of Forks Says:
I don't believe in fate... I dislike the idea of everything pre-planned.
thisarson13 Says:
this one too!
avisthecrow Says:
"Will nations be drowned by the frowns of the old
While individuals are praised by the face of the young"
^ Favorite line. Very observant.
Smiling Devil Says:
I like it very much^^, but you begon almost every sentence with will, I know that you can't start every line with will but it does sounds a bit weird. (If you understand what I mean
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eirra Says:
Wow. That ws excelllent.
e. It was well written and really, really well put together. It flowed nicly too. Godo work! ^^