One of Kai's attacks is creating ords of light and dark and hitting the enemy with the enegy that comes off the orbs. This picture captures her before her attack.
Base: dubird- http://tts.dubird.net/dubird/bases.php
character and story belongs to me
i was commanded to "click here", and i did so expecting to see something that would blow me away.
instead, i'm seeing this. now, i'm not an expert on the human anatomy, but there is something very wrong with her chest. her breasts look crooked and differently sized. i know it's not from a front view, and even taking that into consideration doesn't really change it. the top half of her body looks shorter than her legs, but it's hard to tell with the lack of any depth in here.
the art itself is very mediocre. anime is a style that emphasizes detail (rather than originality, but that's another rant for another time), so one would expect to see at least some detail in an anime drawing. and yet, it's nearly absent here. is her hair a big, dull mass of brown? no? add some lines to show individual strands, and add some shine to make it look sleeker. what about lighting from the two orbs? the one on her right looks awfully bright...why not add some lighting to show that, rather than just a filtered/gradient glow?
her face also seems entirely devoid of detail and emotion. it looks like she is just standing there with her mouth agape. i'm not sure what kind of emotion she is supposed to be having. her eyebrows don't say anything about her emotions, and her mouth is just a pink circle with a black outline.
I think it's pretty good, for a very quick image. It was made to help Du-san test her bases, it wasn't supposed to be some masterpiece that took weeks.
Rammer, there's this really cool thing called 'constructive' cristism. It's where you actually help someone, instead of just telling them that everything they do is wrong. Maybe you should try it sometime. Asshole.
I like it ^^. Don't listen to rude people like Rammer as long as the image pleases you thats all that should matter. And for his comments...if he'd looked closer he would see the shading etc, I can see some on her. I wonder what he was looking at x.
Very pretty. ^^ I am not nearly as good as you at using base blanks with no faces. ;
To Rammer: I understand that you were trying to help Usagii-chan, but it would be much more helpful if you also pointed out some good things about her artwork, instead of everything she did wrong. D:
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i was commanded to "click here", and i did so expecting to see something that would blow me away.
instead, i'm seeing this. now, i'm not an expert on the human anatomy, but there is something very wrong with her chest. her breasts look crooked and differently sized. i know it's not from a front view, and even taking that into consideration doesn't really change it. the top half of her body looks shorter than her legs, but it's hard to tell with the lack of any depth in here.
the art itself is very mediocre. anime is a style that emphasizes detail (rather than originality, but that's another rant for another time), so one would expect to see at least some detail in an anime drawing. and yet, it's nearly absent here. is her hair a big, dull mass of brown? no? add some lines to show individual strands, and add some shine to make it look sleeker. what about lighting from the two orbs? the one on her right looks awfully bright...why not add some lighting to show that, rather than just a filtered/gradient glow?
her face also seems entirely devoid of detail and emotion. it looks like she is just standing there with her mouth agape. i'm not sure what kind of emotion she is supposed to be having. her eyebrows don't say anything about her emotions, and her mouth is just a pink circle with a black outline.
Eira Says:
I think it's pretty good, for a very quick image. It was made to help Du-san test her bases, it wasn't supposed to be some masterpiece that took weeks.
Rammer, there's this really cool thing called 'constructive' cristism. It's where you actually help someone, instead of just telling them that everything they do is wrong. Maybe you should try it sometime. Asshole.
Sammychan Says:
I like it ^^. Don't listen to rude people like Rammer as long as the image pleases you thats all that should matter. And for his comments...if he'd looked closer he would see the shading etc, I can see some on her. I wonder what he was looking at
x.
Anyway good job.
sailornightmare Says:
Awesome!^^
Lady Evelyn Says:
Not bad. I plan on using some of the bases Du made.
00BunnyPuppyChu Says:
Very pretty. ^^ I am not nearly as good as you at using base blanks with no faces.
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To Rammer: I understand that you were trying to help Usagii-chan, but it would be much more helpful if you also pointed out some good things about her artwork, instead of everything she did wrong. D:
Very interesting, Usagii-san....
How did on this artwork, did you to put it on MS Paint and Photoshop or even Pixa...
Just asking..
I already post to your profile...