first shot -
Rain, why is it aiming at the building, looks more like bullet shots than raindrops. Put them on the same angle as the building. Rain works find on second shot tho
Remove the blue outlines on the windows, they don't really fit
Also the body looks a bit ackward. It looks as if he's as tall as 2 floors on that building, maybe make the building larger or the character shorter.
The light colours in the sky don't really work with the dark song you put in, but maybe you weren't aiming for a dark mood.
A texture on the building might make it a little more realistic, though i'm not sure how it might turn out... just experment with it :p
Second shot-
Not much to critique on, you might wanna spend some time working on anatomy. Your feet look good, but from head to pelvis, the proportions look a bit ackward.
Keep going though, I hope I helped :)
Comments
Blake1247 Says:
O.O ill be seening this can i be in it or help?
Lucky Design Says:
first shot -
Rain, why is it aiming at the building, looks more like bullet shots than raindrops. Put them on the same angle as the building. Rain works find on second shot tho
Remove the blue outlines on the windows, they don't really fit
Also the body looks a bit ackward. It looks as if he's as tall as 2 floors on that building, maybe make the building larger or the character shorter.
The light colours in the sky don't really work with the dark song you put in, but maybe you weren't aiming for a dark mood.
A texture on the building might make it a little more realistic, though i'm not sure how it might turn out... just experment with it :p
Second shot-
Not much to critique on, you might wanna spend some time working on anatomy. Your feet look good, but from head to pelvis, the proportions look a bit ackward.
Keep going though, I hope I helped :)
giascle Says:
Ditch the blur. It's unnecessary and it lags.