WIP - Teenage Model

by serious

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May 1st 2007
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Just fishing out for critiques on the modelling. Not really fussed about feedback on the textures (or lack of it). There's 2 main things I want to change after I iron out the rig issues; the bottom of the jacket is a bit off, and alter the bottom of the legs, the final model is actually going to be jeans but it looks like joggin bottoms a little. It's supposed to have a cartoon look but if there's anything else anyone might feel should change let me know. Otherwise, I hope you like it!

Btw I realised the zip on the jacket wasn't attached to the model so it's just kinda floating there >_<

Comments

gofthick Says:

The zip on his hoody and the buckle on his belt don't appear to be rotating with the model, and so they're floating in and out of the model which looks quite bizarre.

Besides that it all looks good.

Tyokio Says:

some bump maps on the shoes will make it look more awsome : D good moddeling work thar

hihosilver Says:

The modeling looks great. The one main crit I have is that the hands seem to be flat. I know they're cartoon but they need curves and depth either way. So I'd give him a nice palm, and give them normal hand shape except without all the details, and since it's cartoon they can always be disproportionate.