Nice, very nice. I've loved this series so far, and it's still going strong with some great artwork. The sense of perception in the 4th panel is awesome
Your execution with knuckles here, really helps add that extra little "LOL" moment to the build up you already had going for this scene's punchline. Great work indeed : D
Everything looks really great with this page. Really the only way I could comment on this is if we get nit-picky. So don't take the following comment too deeply. Its merely a suggestion.
The last panel's execution does not fit well with the rest of the page when compared to the action in the previous panel (or even to a greater extent, your abilities as an artist in past pages) This panel to me suggest an almost rushed effort. You drew the head, the arm, and finally the guy. Your drawing just suggest you put one of top of the other. It dosn't really look like this guy is getting punched. At best it looks like he's balancing on his punch. When someone gets punched, I feel it should look like their punching into a pillow. The impact shows some little (or more depending on the fierocity of the punch) impact like crater in the person's being and his limbs are thrown out from the sheer force of the punch. While you really managed to perform an exceptional job with most of the limbs, his left arm just flat out disappear's on us, for no very logical manner.
Really though, like I said, this is all just nit-picky stuff. I'm willing to bet doughnuts to dollars that you already know of all what I was already talking about, and just were trying your best to complete these tonight as you HAVE been working very hard these last couple of days. So in the end, yah, don't sweat any of this much. You really are on top of what your doing, and I can't wait to see what else you will be able to pull off in the coming weeks.
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Lord Welshi Says:
Nice, very nice. I've loved this series so far, and it's still going strong with some great artwork. The sense of perception in the 4th panel is awesome
DarkOmega Says:
Non lethal methods FOOLERY i say >:3
chaosinuyasha Says:
Knuckles intimidating Eggman is always funny. The
look is cute too.
Starkin Says:
^-^
Alicia-chan better not get hurt...
foolyguy Says:
Your execution with knuckles here, really helps add that extra little "LOL" moment to the build up you already had going for this scene's punchline. Great work indeed : D
Everything looks really great with this page. Really the only way I could comment on this is if we get nit-picky. So don't take the following comment too deeply. Its merely a suggestion.
The last panel's execution does not fit well with the rest of the page when compared to the action in the previous panel (or even to a greater extent, your abilities as an artist in past pages) This panel to me suggest an almost rushed effort. You drew the head, the arm, and finally the guy. Your drawing just suggest you put one of top of the other. It dosn't really look like this guy is getting punched. At best it looks like he's balancing on his punch. When someone gets punched, I feel it should look like their punching into a pillow. The impact shows some little (or more depending on the fierocity of the punch) impact like crater in the person's being and his limbs are thrown out from the sheer force of the punch. While you really managed to perform an exceptional job with most of the limbs, his left arm just flat out disappear's on us, for no very logical manner.
Really though, like I said, this is all just nit-picky stuff. I'm willing to bet doughnuts to dollars that you already know of all what I was already talking about, and just were trying your best to complete these tonight as you HAVE been working very hard these last couple of days. So in the end, yah, don't sweat any of this much. You really are on top of what your doing, and I can't wait to see what else you will be able to pull off in the coming weeks.
zololover Says:
rofl!!
KatCorollon Says:
Knuckles' look in the third panel is funny as hell. xD
Nice job on these past handful of pages. [Since I had to catch up with a bunch x.o;]
Mr OMA Says:
Give 'im time, folks. He's not used to this whole "non-lethal" thing.
zader Says:
i like the first frame
