Love is Being Loved

by Lark Pash

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Love is Being Loved

Love is more than sex
With the man who resides in your heart
It's lying next to him at night
With the comfort of him being there
It's being able to turn over
And staring into one another's eyes
Until he gives you his sheepish grin
And you laugh until your cry
It's leaning in for a kiss
After you've rubbed your hand
On the stubbles on his chin
It's feeling his warm breath
Lingering on the back of your neck
It's listening to his calm and soothing voice
Like floating in some peaceful mountain stream
That lies on only one map...the map of Eden
It's leaning into him
Feeling his heart beat in his chest
And feeling it quicken
When your lips touch
It's knowing he will stick around
To hold your hand on winter walks
He's your shoulder to cry on
And someone to deeply admire, no to love
It's a love to never be lost
Love is being loved
By the man you love the most
> 'Etnies' by Lark Pash
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Mature Apr 20th 2007
Tags:
boyfriend free verse hugs human nature husband kisses love marriage romance sensual
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Something I wrote after finishing the Nicholas Sparks book, True Believer. Only mature because I used the word sex. *Shrugs* (Better safe than sorry..right?)

Comments

Lora Chan Says:

Very beautiful poem. Makes me think of my boyfriend. Wonderful job.

rakrebs Says:

;-;

I'm an emotional wreck lately and this has made it worse!

It's a truly beautiful poem.

Grape juice Says:

Ah! Wonderful write!

In my opinion I'd use a little punctuation just for more emphasis but
As I was reading I could imagine myself and my boyfriend as well.

It's all true and seemingly cliche...but it's just the way it is.

Good Job.

blue swan Says:

This is beautiful.. :)

hbilley Says:

aw, beautiful poem!

FyreNWater Says:

too many people confuse "love" with "lust". thanks for the poem! it'll make people rethink their definition of the word!

funnybuggyme Says:

wonderful poem, Lark! Wonderfully written and so true!

ShereTwilight Says:

So great!

dfBlaze Says:

yay, love poems...!! yay for more depression xD

Anyway, really nice writing. :)

Ozzyturtle123 Says:

Love it!