is it really so lost?

by kallyinu

in Completed Works

is it really so lost?

Look up at the sky
Watch the wisps fly by
Long for a hug so tight
Long for a lover for the night

What is a feeling that makes you light
Makes your heart take flight
What makes you tick
Without it, makes you sick

What do you do when shes not there
Not there to run her fingers through your hair
What do you do when its not real
When you learn not to feel

What happens when your heart goes gold
Your no longer bold
and what happens when you close your eyes
your dead inside, and your heart never flies?
> 'Doble Troube' by kallyinu

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Apr 18th 2007
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human nature lost romance
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Shutaboy Says:

You live the life of a soldier. A soldier with nothing let to live for.

Ozzyturtle123 Says:

Nice.

Fitos Says:

"Without it, makes you sick" I think this would be better "Without it you get sick"? Well, wouldn't be such a good line anyhow, but it would sound more 'correct' if you get me.

I suppose you have had love which is now going cold? It happens... sadly.