WIP Sun Poem (Revised)

by Lasota

in Works in Progress

WIP Sun Poem (Revised)

The sun rises in the blue early morning sky

It is a new day so all is bright outside

The birds are singing outside our windows glad that winter has gone

The fog slowly begins to dissipate fading slowly away

As the fog fades away you can see the sun hiding behind the clouds

Then the clouds which are as fluffy as cotton balls begin to fade away

Next thing you know you have a good view of the sun

It shines down on you like a laser beam

You can feel the tocuh of the sun's rays on your body

The tennis ball and baseball fly through the air

Also the weather outside becomes warmer and it becomes breezy

All of these things mean one thing

They simply mean...

That springtime has arrived.
> Sun

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Apr 18th 2007
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free verse general happy nature sun
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I wrote the first one and didnt like it so here's a new one. Tell me what you think.

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Blake1247 Says:

its kinda the same hmm?

Mile Says:

This one's better than the first one, neat work