Sun

> 'Sun and Ocean' by Lasota

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Apr 18th 2007
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free verse general happy nature sky
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We have to write poems in English about sometthing outsdie and I chose nature. The poem is due Monday. Any comments are welcome and appriciated.

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nekoangel Says:

yay the sun * give me a tan*

Kame Says:

It's not very poetic.. it's more of a narrative split up into lines.

Blake1247 Says:

i liked it ^^