The World Upon My Shoulders

by kaill armitage

in Completed Works

The World Upon My Shoulders

Falling to pieces
Despair all around
Darkness enshrouds
Reaching up with all my might
Holding a heavy weight
Getting heavier by the second
A glow upon my chest
Growing brighter
Bringing me to my knees
The weight still growing
The light getting brighter
Laughter all around
I smile in response
My light growing brighter
The despair disappearing
As I hold it upon my shoulders
The weight of the world.

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Apr 18th 2007
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burden free verse
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Well this came to me as I helped out a bunch of my friends. It was just one of those times I felt I was holding the world upon my shoulders because of all the problems that are going on. Well enjoy.

Comments

Man Go tailS Says:

X3 I like it

winkette Says:

I like it a lot

Not me Says:

Hooray! Front page!

BeEjAy01 Says:

alot of those lines are from songs!

shanamania Says:

I like it. You really do write great poetry. *envy*

xHydro Angelx Says:

absolutly amaizin

wolf5674 Says:

amazing poetry! really good stuff!