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Soul Suicide
Taking this blade
Straight to my heart
Not like anyone will notice
The blood upon the floor
Or the ghost in this shell of a body
No one cares enough
To wonder about the fight inside
The shadows that take over
Bring forth the souls suicide.
Horror strikes
As the blood flows
The carpet turns black
The world goes blank
A dance inside the mind
Flickers of light
A hand...no a smile...
Coldness takes over
Then emptiness
There should be no breathing
There should be no realization
Then screaming persist
Eyes open wide
There is no darkness
Light shown onto the floor
There lies my body
My ghost is free of the shell
The capsule, the prison
There is no pain
In the death of a soul
Only emptiness
Everyone has left me abandoned
I have been left behind
There is no pity, no tears shed
Eerie silence all around
I've given up everything
Why? For what? At what cost?
The soul's freedom comes at a price
It may be death
It may be life
But it is only a whisper in the world
Many are left
And they suffer
And they live
Souls lost, scared, and screaming
Souls that may be lost before the next dawn
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Comments
Lasota Says:
Cool I like it a lot. It msut ahve been challenging.
ME LIKE LACK OF FORCED RHYMES, IT MAKE POEM LOOK PROFESSIONAL.
ME NO LIKE SOMEWHAT GENERIC OVERTONES, ME THINK YOU HAVE TALENT TO BE MORE ORIGINAL.
ME WISH GOOD LUCK IN FUTURE.
Dragonstar Says:
Pysi-chan is it is darker but the rhythmic of it makes me want to put it to a tune
. Very nice!