Help Me Be Amazing

by ChickenWuss

in Completed Works

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Help Me Be Amazing

I want...to do something amazing. This world is so boring and bland in it's monotonous gloom. I want to be able to make dreams come true to sprout the wings of my soul and live my life to the fullest. Each day I block out the real world more and more only to be left craving my fantasies that will never come true. Impossibility, how you taunt me so.

Someone help me. I need it bad now, I'm going a tad insane. So bad I want to fly, so bad I want to be someone, something, anything! I feel so lost in my longing, my lips quiver, as my body trembles restlessly. This pain is rediculous, this thirst unquenchable.

I want to be alive, to act out and show the world the real me that I hide behind closed doors, locked up tight in my mind. It hurts to be so shy and self-concsious in reality and the exact opposite that in my mind.

The emptiness of a beating heart only makes it more hollow. Open this locket and fill it before it's too late for me. I want to be saved, No! I desperately need it. Let me live again before the world decides to envelope me into fantsticly outlandish dreams.

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Oh the things I could do, I'd be amazing.
> 'THE COLORS THEY TAUNT ME!!' by ChickenWuss

Description

Apr 17th 2007
Tags:
dreams human nature narrative surreal youth
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Something I wrote when I was feeling terribly empty insides. Hope you enjoy. I'm sure there are other people out there who have felt this way. The preview pic,obviously not mine, but I found it cute and the other pic wouldn't load so Que cera, cera

Comments

ZombiexPanda Says:

Erm - Pre read comment quick - how is this on frontpage with a -1 score? And no comments, even?

ChickenWuss Says:

Hey, um, to the person who left me the -1 this piece isn't meant to be pleasing to anyone but myself, I was just letting out my feelings and thought I'd put it up. If you found it offensive or something, for any reason that i couldn't possibly place my finger on, than I apologize. Apparently you've never felt the way I did when writing this piece.

ObliviousShadow Says:

I think its good.

DarkOmega Says:

it is good.......why not use the gun to have a great effect........or charm