Minnie Mouse Re-Mix Part III
The temperamental duck escorted the attractive female mouse to her door step. They started to speak but exchanged bashfull smiles instead. Minnie Mouse sighed softly and looked into the duck's eyes.
"I had so much fun today, Donald." She said, with a tiny coo in her voice.
Donald kicked a pebble slightly embarrassed. He drew his hand behind his head and blushed.
"Aww, it was nothing. Even if you had to give me a punch in the jaw to make me behave."
"Well, it's not like you didn't deserve it," she said as she wagged her fist playfully.
Donald instinctively cowered, remembering the amount of pain she had administered earlier.
Minnie uncurled her fist and placed it under his bill.
"I would let you in, but it's late. Goodnight, Donald."
Donald was drawn into her now and couldn't seem to fathom that the night had finally come to an end. Was he about to let her slip away like that, atleast without a little something to top off the evening?
He pushed his weight into the door, which caused the both of them to rebound into the room.
"I think I'm in love with you, Minnie." He said, blushing all the while grasping her by the arms.
The mouse writhed and pushed him out of the door.
"GoodNIGHT, Donald."
The door slammed in the face of the dispondent duck. He took a moment to collect himself and tipped is hat over his forhead.
"Dirty, quakaquakquaaaka,little ,quaaakaquaak BBBBBbll!" he fumed, even more inarticulately than usual. He marched off to his car and sped off, caressing the spot she had placed her paw on.
An hour later, the porch lights switched off one by one down the peaceful street. A soft rustle eminated from the bush by Minnie Mouse's home as soon as her lights had been turned off. The dark figure snickered derisivly as he tip-toed his way down the block, avoiding passing cars along the way.
"Now..." the gruff voice muttered to himself.
"Little Minnie, you are mine!"
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Photoshop and I are making sweet sweet music together. I learn, it teaches. I think I did a fine job hear, barring a few, if not blatant, errors. Please enjoy the peice and the story with it. I worked hard on it!
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Comments
zololover Says:
GASP!! =O I BET IT'S MICKEY GONE INSANE AT THE END!! D:
allaze Says:
very nice well done ! and i like this ears because it's more better and realistic X3
thePatches Says:
It's so weird....but so well done!!
DeviousZen Says:
And so the story continues. I like the fact that Donald ultimately didn't have his way...he didn't really seem to appreciate her as a person either. Very stellar coloring, I like the glossy cell-like effect that looks very old school and detailed. Reminds me of the older episodes of Mickey Mouse and the gang. A neat story is unwinding here and I wonder who the character will be at the end...I can't wait for the next epic installment. Keep up the goodness
skatCAT Says:
Donald got served.
Rogerregorroger Says:
Cool, love the lighting effects here.
Beldrama Says:
Minnie turns me on...
A very splendid picture!!
TheBlackMarket Says:
Hahaha, oh wow. Poor Donald!
The way you draw Minnie is beyond adorable.
Goldenavatar Says:
I gotta give Donald credit, he'll test the waters, but he won't tease a hurricane. He can take no for an answer, gruff silly duck that he is. I dunno why, but with her leotard/one piece she's wearing, I can't help but feel it's missing something. I blame TheGreenSquid, aka Morganagod for his adding a pair of jeans to the costume of the Teen Titans character, Raven. I dunno why, but it just looked like a good combination. By the way, has Minnie been workin' her glutes?
flyingfox560 Says:
Love This! The Story is so entertaining, as well!