I just want you

by KankuroXLyndzay

in Completed Works

I just want you

Here is my fragile heart
I serve it on this plate
I lay it all before you
This isn't just some bait

You just don't really care
about the tears i wasted
all the nights i stayed up
and the pain i've tasted

You talk about the others
yet you didn't even know
that you were the only one
who ever made my heart go

You didn't know these feelings
I never let them shine threw
Everyone noticed, and I denided
because i didn't know what to do

I know you have someone
they love you very dear
I never wanted to hurt you
that was my biggest fear

Then the truth was reveled
my secret slattered on the walls
for everyone to see
waiting for your reply i began to fall

My heart began to seperate
my love began to fade
knowing all my dreams
were nothing but what I made

Looking at the stars
wishing you were there
knowing we could never
have this to share

Knowing she is with you
and I have to hide again
in the shadows of your mind
letting me poor heart mend

So you don't know what to say
you forget it even happened
I brush it off my shoulder
and just covering up with laughing

Give it time to sink in
and tell me how you feel
just one tiny little kiss
could probably seal the deal

Today i put it on the line
everything my heart felt
was placed in front of you
and yet i was the one that melt

Please tell me that I mean something
That i'm not just another girl
Tell me that you want me too
I'm not just a lost pearl

She is just so perfect
something I could never be
Plase tell I'm what you want
why can't it just be me?

I want you, nothing less or more
please just give me a chance
and make my dreams come true
ask me for just one dance

I could never say no to you
even though you broke my heart
not because you didn't love me
you didn't say anything or let me be a part

knowing how you feel now, that i see
the the way it has to be
I'll forget i even say it
and I'll live my life just for me.

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Mar 31st 2007
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angst journal poem romance sensual sonnet spiritual youth
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Here is a poem I wrote while i was sitting here at my friend's lol Love ya Barter

Well today I told BeeJay that I liked him, well Barter
did and this is how I feel

Don't mnd the scary picture!!

Comments

SheenaXZelos Says:

;_____; so freakin cute... and sad D: *flicks your lip from the preview pic*
Great poem sweetie! and whoa o_o such emotion

2ndself Says:

Lovely poem. I do know how embarrasing it is when someone finds out that you 'like' them Yeah...I don't plan on letting that happen again.

Kaiya Sumeragi Says:

The emotion is amazing! I can feel what ur trying to share with us and it's powerful

Kratosgirl Says:

Aww its a lovely poem ;o; i dunno why i'm commenting old stuff lol

MixedCreature Says:

this is so beautiful and sad *hugs*