::Just Leave Me Alone::

by cellieruru

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::Just Leave Me Alone::

I'm not angry, not even upset--
Don't you dare say sorry
For something you don't get
You say that you understand;
What the hell do you know?
Stop hounding me for the answer
And just leave me alone

'Cuz there's some things in life
That I have to face for myself;
Sometimes I have to learn
How to stand without help

Or maybe it's something,
Something personal to me
That hurts when you ask
When you won't leave me be

And still other times,
It's really nothing at all--
And the more that you pester me,
The harder you fall

So why don't you stop right there?
Things are better left unsaid
Because no matter what you think,
You can't see inside my head
And no matter what you say,
Sometimes things are going fine--
I just need to blow off steam
And be away for some time
And no matter what you do,
When you see me in the zone
Ignore the impulse to find out what's "wrong"
And just leave me alone
> '::Temari::for Gemu-kun::' by cellieruru

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Mar 31st 2007
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alone angst human nature society youth
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I was searching through a whole bunch of my old poems, and here was one that interested me...




Poem (c) Me
Pic (c) cfraser.deviantart.com

Comments

cellieruru Says:

Front page! wh00t!

ghostlydead Says:

this is me is swear
i love it

Demurest Says:

:3 Congrats on front page.

Aparently, you were angry, but it's not a bad thing. Good way to vent, and I like it.

AngelsWing Says:

*Blinks*
Its very true, unfortunately, from the person who's asking point of view, They are just trying to help, and flipping out and saying they ' wouldn't understand' only makes them hurt and confused, because they didn't do anything wrong...Nice poem though ^^ Me likey.

AngelsWing Says:

No, because your off...by just a tad, but your off...
You present this debate assuming the said person, who is worried about the ' just leave me alone' er, is doing this to satisfy their curiosity. That is just a selfish way to pester people, and not always correct. By just telling a friend, It makes you feel better and get over it, and you can talk to otehr people without being an antisocial recluse all day. Did it ever occure to said person that people actually CARE or WORRY about them? Or that the way they act affects others? Yes, maybe its not about the person, but its also not all about the ' just leave me alone'er. If its something of their personal privacy, then they shouldn't be punishing other people anyway, and should state so, instead of replying childishly ' just leave me alone'.
Sometimes, that person Just wants to help, And pretending other people are idiots and can't figure out when someones upset, is just plain rude.
I'm sorry for caring, Clearly we should all act like selfish pigs.

AngelsWing Says:

Maybe some people WANT TO SOLVE THING SO THEY CAN GET ON WITH THEIR LIVES, BECAUSE NOT SOLVING SOMETHIGN LEAVES PEOPLE UPSET, AND MAYBEE YOU CAN IGNOR THAT BUT OTHER PEOPLE AREN'T THAT EASILY RECTIFIED WITH ' I'M HURT BUT IT DOESN'T REALLY MATTER', BECAUSE THINGS DO MATTER AND ONE DAY YOU MIGHT UNDERSTAND THAT BUT UNTILL THEN, FINE, LETS JUST DROP IT BECAUSE AS LONG AS YOU ARE HAPPY THAT IS ALL THAT REALLY MATTERS!!!!!
Great, thank God, ignore me.Everyone else does. I'm so sorry i asked, SO sorry i care, and GOD CURSE YOU FOR GIVING ME THIS EMPATHY, BECAUSE HAD IT NOT BEEN FOR THAT I'D BE LIKE EVERY OTHER ONE OF YOU'RE EFFING CREATURES AND JUST NOT GIVE A DANG!

TorrentSilvatine Says:

there's so many times when I've felt like this. I like it, a lot...and understand where you're coming from, to a point.

howlsawiz Says:

i love it. i can sooo relate to this!

monicachaloupka Says:

beautiful^^

shadowsinthedark Says:

nice. good rhythm and rhyme scheme.