The beginning progression is product of the teacher of my Practical Music Theory class at school. The class's job was to finish the song, more or less, based on his progression. His original progression wasn't the same in rhythm but the key and chords were his idea, the chorus n bridges are mine :]
I dunno about that transition at 2:10...or lack thereof, but I stayed home from my first two periods to finish this so i shouldnt nitpick before i become even more late to school ;D
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kapt Says:
mad beats dude. i like your style. check out some of mine on my site
elle Says:
I like the pacing in this one. It's like a pulse, and it has a real jazzy vibe to it, which I like. I also like the piano gearing up around 0:55 or so; it's a pretty little hook. That lack of transition isn't so bad--I mean, it just sounds like a part of the piano's song, y'know? Well, whatev', I like it, so.
kapt Says:
nice trak. i wouldnt say you ahead of my skill though
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
Ohhh, I'm really liking this! It has a very cool jazzy feel to it that I can't really describe it but I enjoy it. This may be one of my favorites of yours.
WiseCracker Says:
Reminds me of that one song from Final Fantasy 8... like, when your in that one city with the parade
Just a lot more upbeat... something I could really jam to
2key Says:
oh, man awesome drumwork... and I love the main theme and how you progress it...
I had something similair, doing a tune with a progression that I got from my teacher... will turn out pretty decent...
mercury yume Says:
I like that you used simple beats at the start so as to not drown out the piano melody. I love how it builds up as well. I don't think I noticed anything at first at 2:10, but I see what you mean. I think it's fine, it's subtle rather than glaring, so it doesn't seem like it's jarring or anything.
Ooooh. Pianoy and jazzy. Delicious.
ebola Says:
Classic
LAEluu Says:
Hope he likes it. o: