My fursona and a mystery man (I don't have a boyfriend, so I get to draw mystery men

) chilling at the park.
I'm fairly pleased with how this came out, except for the background. I think it would have been better if I'd used watercolors instead of colored pencil, but this paper was too thin to do that on. :[ So any suggestions you guys may have on how to make the background better would be very appreciated. :3 I can't erase anything at this point, but I can put on more layers of colored pencil.
It took a few tries to get it to look like she was just lying on him and not crushing him.

In the original sketch, his mid section looked very 2-D and it looked like she was squishing him into a pancake, so hopefully the finished product doesn't look like that. I also did a handful of things with his arm (the one behind his head); originally he had it on the ground supporting some of his weight, then I finally made him rest his head on it. And his left leg was very fun to do, because I wanted it to look sort of tilted outward (toward the viewer), to make him and his pose look more 3-D. And dudes septum piercings = hawt.
Enjoy. :3
Artwork and my fursona (the female) © H.C.Brock, 2007
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Comments
Bazaar Says:
Zomg thats adorable
It looks great, dont worry!
At least you're aware of the flaws (what flaws!?) and how to improve (not that you need to!)
NOTI HATAKE 88 Says:
aaawwww i love it you did a great job, what ever you decide to do with it im sure it'll come out GREAT!
love the piercings(septum and dud)very nice touch