Here is one of the drawings I did for the experiment I was doing that sort of failed.
I was going to draw something for an hour only each day. This one took 1.5 hours, or 1.5 days.
This is one of 3 drawings.
I like how shiny it is. Good job getting that specularity to really stand out!
It feels like that lumbar spine needs some kind of value or texture, though. It's not shiny like everything else, but it kind of stands out as being plain.
Freakin' nice. !! I really can't think of much to critique on this. Overall, that is an excellent job of overall inking, as well as lighting and shadow and effects (you made him freakin' shiny! !!!). I'll agree with The Love is Warrior in saying that some value could be given to the lumbar spine, and also that little shoulder turbine, but otherwise rawk man. :)
Whooooa, this is sweet! I love those feet a lot. The only thing I noticed when I first saw this is that while the value is *really* nice, I find myself getting lost in all the black and white -- as in, I have trouble deciphering what's going on. (the head hangs down, so it gets abit lost in the value of the chest, etc.) But I do think it's mostly the back arm that gets lost, so I think just changing the contrast a bit to differentiate distance would help a lot. :)
Wow. How do you do those reflections like that. Simply amazing. I like your robot designs. They differ so much from the normal Bulky stuff out there. Like Riot130 said, can't find anything to crit on. Sorry, I only have compliments for you this time.
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FourPawLink Says:
Let me be the first to say;
That is DAMN cool.
girlunderground Says:
Amazing work!
haohaohayashi Says:
thats pro!
wat type of shininess is that armor..?
The Love is Warrior Says:
I like how shiny it is. Good job getting that specularity to really stand out!
It feels like that lumbar spine needs some kind of value or texture, though. It's not shiny like everything else, but it kind of stands out as being plain.
JadeTheRaptor Says:
wooow. i think it looks really good :p the lines are so cool, makes it look really 3d
Riot13O Says:
Freakin' nice.
!! I really can't think of much to critique on this. Overall, that is an excellent job of overall inking, as well as lighting and shadow and effects (you made him freakin' shiny! 
!!!). I'll agree with The Love is Warrior in saying that some value could be given to the lumbar spine, and also that little shoulder turbine, but otherwise rawk man. :)
zelink14 Says:
Whooooa, this is sweet! I love those feet a lot.
The only thing I noticed when I first saw this is that while the value is *really* nice, I find myself getting lost in all the black and white -- as in, I have trouble deciphering what's going on. (the head hangs down, so it gets abit lost in the value of the chest, etc.) But I do think it's mostly the back arm that gets lost, so I think just changing the contrast a bit to differentiate distance would help a lot. :)
DarKsidE Says:
WoW, looks very cool. Kinda looks like those bio mechanical guys out of the Xombie series.
FX Morph Says:
Wow. How do you do those reflections like that. Simply amazing. I like your robot designs. They differ so much from the normal Bulky stuff out there. Like Riot130 said, can't find anything to crit on. Sorry, I only have compliments for you this time.
HunterBahamut Says:
I don't know if you 'failed' or not, this looks really interesting. Has a great deisgn and pretty impressive details and linework.