thats really good, see u r awesome!
Don't force the rhyme. Some lines sound really awkard, especially for if your mom could give you one more birth.
Positive comment: you didn't spell anything wrong. Facetious comment: that includes "I"
very good, yet very sad. I hope you feel better soon.
this is so depressing! i like writing, but i'm not very good. u're awesome though!
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codyla Says:
thats really good, see u r awesome!
Blake1247 Says:
WildBlueSun Says:
Don't force the rhyme. Some lines sound really awkard, especially for if your mom could give you one more birth.
WildBlueSun Says:
Positive comment: you didn't spell anything wrong.
Facetious comment: that includes "I"
Pepsicola22 Says:
very good, yet very sad. I hope you feel better soon.
broken silence x0 Says:
this is so depressing! i like writing, but i'm not very good. u're awesome though!.gif "Nudge nudge, wink wink ;)")