Vanilla Shape Appears! Redux

by BewareTheJim

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Description

Mar 14th 2007
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burning hard violencefight waynes
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Vanilla Shape in all of his glory, with some tweaks and in a higher resolution.
Still, it could use some work.

What do you think? What can be changed for the better?

Feature

Featured by Lillico
Nov 15th 2008
I would love to meet up with this monster in a dark alley. That would brighten my day.

Jim is a perfectionist and it shows in his work. His characters are simple but extremely polished and easy to love. The "finished" quality of all his art is something that really inspires me. Everything he creates is like a shiny new toy.

Comments

yiang Says:

wow this reminds me of that movie...I forgot what it was called...
it featured huge sandworms that burrowed underground in the desert and ate people....
I just remembered the cute old japanese man died :(
anyways this is much cuter than the worms in that movie. About as cute as a worm can get :)

mistergoodface Says:

none of this is meant as in insult. The two versions both have their merets, i think you should have kept the licker out line but i like that hes casting a shadow and that the green in his mough is lighter now it also might work better with out that explinations point it doesn't seem to be missed much. thats all

Captain Gauntlet Says:

Nice. I think the underbelly of the creature and everything underneath it's shadow should be darker, seeing as how it's so monstrous. Otherwise, nice work.

Daj Says:

you can't see anything wrong with it unless you're really analyzing it.
even then I can only think of two things:
1) that there should be some shadows in the face
2) the rocks along it's back tend to distract from the worm itself.

Cat Megex Says:

Hm...perhaps make the "2" a bit smaller/offset with the "H" and "O"?

knight block Says:

The worm itself looks very well done. All that I think should be improved is the other characters, and some specs of the house

AshHavynn Says:

I love the worm, it's ADORABLE. It's swirly cheeks could be less of a blindening color, though. Just sayin'.

Kagorae Says:

Sweet, I like this catterpillar.. snake.. thing!

Stickman550 Says:

OMG Shai-hulud!

i like the expression the most

Starsity Says:

The H 2 O along the side seems a little flat against the incredibly roung caterpillar creature.
Like it's just sitting there, and will hover as the caterpillar moves.

this is a really cute picture.