Bwaahaha! lol anyways i couldn't think of a title... this was just a quick sketch i did of my original character. she's a villain, but she's an innocent villain yadda yadda yadda haha. weird pose right? i don't know if i'll have time to color it >< anyways, there's a whole bunch of random dots on the pic and they're really bothering me!!! so yeah... there ya go! i always enjoy CONSTRUCTIVE criticism :) thank you!
this is MY character bwahahaha
Comments
beka Says:
nice lineart! good work!
MoonlightAlchemist Says:
Ooo! Awesome design!
I think the pose is fairly awesome, but, you might want to consider making the neck line closer to her chin. 
That is the only thing I can see that sets this pic off a lil'.
But I must say, this is one neat lineart! ^o^ Great job!
Sense Says:
lovely line art. :3 The position looks alright. The only other thing I could spot has already been said by someone
so i wont repeat that critique 
Looking forward to the colored version soon.
purple cartoon Says:
Good job so far, but the neck is a tad skinny. Also, you may want to consider adding just the edge of her right eye... it looks a bit far back in the pic. At least the tip of the eyelashes should probably be showing.
Other than that, though, it's very good. Keep up the good work, and I hope you color it soon. ^^