Ya, don't mind the name.....just don't ask. I really like the water, and the roof and the cloth thing over the door. It' looks good to me and I'm very proud
The water's wonderful. I like her hair thing, too, and the way you colored her skin; especially the face.
Now, on to the critiques! *horns blare annoyingly in the background* Her proportions are off quite significantly, but this pose IS difficult, so you should feel good you did as well as you did - some things to consider when drawing; try sitting down yourself, first, in front of a mirror where you can see yourself, and using yourself as a reference the next time you try drawing something like this. With an example in front of your eyes, you should be able to fix some of your worst problems. The rest is solved only by practice. *hangs head sadly at the words* So, practice, practice, practice! And remember; even if it SEEMS like you're getting no-where, every drawing's a step closer to 'perfection'!
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Booky Says:
The water's wonderful. I like her hair thing, too, and the way you colored her skin; especially the face.

Now, on to the critiques! *horns blare annoyingly in the background* Her proportions are off quite significantly, but this pose IS difficult, so you should feel good you did as well as you did - some things to consider when drawing; try sitting down yourself, first, in front of a mirror where you can see yourself, and using yourself as a reference the next time you try drawing something like this. With an example in front of your eyes, you should be able to fix some of your worst problems. The rest is solved only by practice. *hangs head sadly at the words* So, practice, practice, practice! And remember; even if it SEEMS like you're getting no-where, every drawing's a step closer to 'perfection'!