Attention whore

Another heart wench.
You're not missing me as much as I miss you.
Scattered memories as I crumble.
You're not with me now.
Not loving what I have to say.
Not caring about the hours I spend worrying.
"See you soon." is the last thing you said.
But now I realise that was just your way of saying farewell.
Do you really hate me so much that you can not look at me.
A call.
A letter.
A simple wave on the street.
All could end my hope of your returned love.
But yet you seem to want to make me hang by a thread.
You want me to crave you.
Attention whore.
That is all I am for you.
And too you.

> With out you

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Mar 5th 2007

Tags:: free verse whore
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uhm yes I'm having another one of those days where someone I want to talk to is ignoring me. .

So I write really crappy poetry.

I'm so emo. v-v

****Picture not mine*******

It really doesn't go well with the poem either. . . o well.

Comments

Passionate Wings Says:

Very strong. Even though it doesn't rhyme, I like how the words really flow together. Impressive that you did it in six minutes. :)

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Strawz Says:

:'(

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Chichika Says:

I like this.
But I'd think that it doesn't need full stops after every line (like the one, "last thing you said", I don't think it needs full stop. In my opinion, it'd sound more artistic without one), and the 9th line could have question mark instead of full stop... That's just my opinion, though ;