Someone's Puppet

so i was at the bookstore yesterday "doing some homework" when i felt like really drawing! so i picked up the manga Othello vol. 4 or 3 i cant remember!! and i was reading it! and came across a picture that i liked lots! so i tried to draw it TT_TT this is how it came out!

anywho let me know what you think!
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