This is my second try on architecture things. I made this in 2 days, it has 25 textures and 4 lights, i love how its done, kinda peaceful and quiet. Please let me kow what do you think.
Really nice for 2 days work.
I like your idea and there for I will crit it.
If you dont like crits dont read beyond this point!!
I wanted to give you some pointers on lighting and then noticed you are using C4D.
As I have never used C4D I will only say this: Lighting and mapping is what makes a scene, your mapping is heading the right way, it just needs some scaling.
As for lighting once again right idea your shading just needs some tweeking.
The pillows seem to be clones? To make the scene not to linear rotate them so that the texture doesnt seem so projected on the pillows.
Its will give your scene that added touch of realism.
Last thing, open one of the doors so that the scroll and curtains have a reason to be moved the way they are. Just an idea.
Keep up the good work!!
Just for interest how long does a frame take to render?
Comments
shinobiryuuchan Says:
Very nice =D
the shadow on the pillows and scroll is just a little too dark
I loooooove the colors!x3
beccaecka Says:
Wow that is amazing!
Yes yes yes! *favorites*
DSMeatte Says:
Wow! Good job =D
Beldrama Says:
So much smex.
The Enchanted Shoe Says:
It looks very nice, i especially like the scroll on the wall
Armitag3 Says:
Really nice for 2 days work.
Just an idea.
I like your idea and there for I will crit it.
If you dont like crits dont read beyond this point!!
I wanted to give you some pointers on lighting and then noticed you are using C4D.
As I have never used C4D I will only say this: Lighting and mapping is what makes a scene, your mapping is heading the right way, it just needs some scaling.
As for lighting once again right idea your shading just needs some tweeking.
The pillows seem to be clones? To make the scene not to linear rotate them so that the texture doesnt seem so projected on the pillows.
Its will give your scene that added touch of realism.
Last thing, open one of the doors so that the scroll and curtains have a reason to be moved the way they are.
Keep up the good work!!
Just for interest how long does a frame take to render?
2ndself Says:
Wow, looks like a naise, cell shaded, chinese style hut
Shadowii2 Says:
Wow, really well made japanese house look! Nice work!
Csonic Says:
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
Jordan Kendall Says:
Wow thats amazing.