Waiting for the sun to rise

by KatrinaVanTassel

in Completed Works

< 'Mike Jake and I afterrr the Msi show' by KatrinaVanTassel

Waiting for the sun to rise

As it takes over me slowly, I can feel the pain now.
Holding the last breath I will ever take.
Closing my eyes to the world I'm leaving behind.
Falling for the last time.
All I want you to know is that I'm dying for you.
Suffering is nothing for me now.
Now all you have to do is just wait for the sun to raise.

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Feb 26th 2007
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dark and horror poetry
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This is an actually good poem..
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Comments

monicachaloupka Says:

great poem

KM Chan Says:

Wonderful poem! It really grabs you. hehe.

~KM

cat loves boyfriend Says:

Awsome poem! Very awsome! Awsomely awsome! Superly awsome! Ok i'll shut up now.

Nakia Otieno Says:

wow! it's really good!!

The masked ducky Says:

congratulations and awesome work!!!!

Vamp777 Says:

I like it a lot!

kibasmine Says:

wow!!!!!!!!!!^^

DarkPrincessOf Says:

it's sad, but i like it.^^