As it takes over me slowly, I can feel the pain now.
Holding the last breath I will ever take.
Closing my eyes to the world I'm leaving behind.
Falling for the last time.
All I want you to know is that I'm dying for you.
Suffering is nothing for me now.
Now all you have to do is just wait for the sun to raise.
This is an actually good poem..
Poem(C)Me
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Comments
monicachaloupka Says:
great poem
KM Chan Says:
Wonderful poem!
It really grabs you. hehe.
~KM
cat loves boyfriend Says:
Awsome poem! Very awsome! Awsomely awsome! Superly awsome! Ok i'll shut up now.
Nakia Otieno Says:
wow! it's really good!!
The masked ducky Says:
congratulations and awesome work!!!!
Vamp777 Says:
I like it a lot!
kibasmine Says:
wow!!!!!!!!!!^^
DarkPrincessOf Says:
it's sad, but i like it.^^