sumthings different...

by thgfd

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Nov 29th 2004
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sorta sumthin new.. still going w/ a new style tho.. but i like it.. the sorta.. non challant finised stuff.. and yeah boys.. this one isnt finished either.... but.. itll get thar eh? anyways, i hope u guys like it,... howver.. i WISH i had a refference photo for this.. right now im jus guessin at where shadows n stuff sould be so.. im shootin in the dark

BUT ANYWAYS.. i like it thus far.. jus submitting it as a pre-relase thing for everbodys

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Booky Says:

Don't you just HATE it when you work forever and ever and ever on a picture, and you get like 5 views and no comments? T.T
Well, methinks it's time to remedy that somewhat! It's a wonderful picture, very reminescent of the FMV style in FF8 and all those. Beautiful hair and shading. I think it could be improved with greater degrees of color between the strak orange and stark blue, but it's still pretty as/is. Oh, and the BG (to me) seems a bit blank and improvised. It could spice up the whole figure with a bit of improvement, but then again, it could also take away from the figure. *shrugs* Your call on that.

Archaenon Says:

From a starting point of view. The shading is nice , watch however , you need to had in some more extremes with the lighting on the neck and the lights on the nose, they catch the brunt of most light. Maybe in some more extremes with the dark. The ear is a little high , but it works. The hair puzzles me though , is it long in the front then cut , or pulled back then a pony tail or loose hair before the ear , or..i dunno , i dont understand the light behind the hair , if his hair is thick , that should not be there , if its stringy , there should be some shadows to the individual hair. other than that i like the idea , i like the pose alot. The nose and the lip line are perfect. You might want to correct the line under the nose , it should follow the contour of the upper lip . Outside of that , nice start , looking forward to the final product.

krampenjr Says:

this looks very interesting and kudos for attempting painter. i personally won't touch it.
i really don't know what to say beacuse it's a work in progress. it's hard to see where or what you're going to do with it.

if your going for the fantastic world of stylized lighting: i think you have a fantastic start :)i see where your light source is, but you have to be careful of where the light will hit on the face and where it will bounce the light to. the jawline could use a little bounce light, something subtle right at the edge. also, the shadows at the eye are very thick and darker than anywhere elseexcept the jawline. if you're intending that kind of contrast, then i would darken the nose shadow at the end and the curve of the nostril.

other than that dumb nitpicking, i can't really say much more than i like your choice of colors and i'l kinda hoping that you make the background puffy clouds because that's what they kinda look like. i'd like to see it when you're done, i bet twill be suberb!