Yeah, the arm's all fixed up and lovely. Great stuff going on with the shading and the highlighting. The one thing I would add is that compared to the rest of the body, the face looks like it has much lighter shadows than the dark shadows on the body.
Great job though! How did you get that effect on the shirt, where the shadow kinda looks like a reddish gradient? I think it looks freakin' awesome.
I am totally useless in the critique club for things that are not human~ o/~
I like the hands! They feel like they have a lot of strength gripping things (apple) which is really cool and something I can't do.
We just took turns covering either the body (leaving head and tail) or the head and tail, leaving only body. DD We decided the body part looks a bit like a really buff drow and the head and tail are some sort of kickass dragonthing. I am so useless at composite anatomy. I really like the head and tail parts as a dragonthing though. Cool horns and cool tail.
Um~ Probably the weird thing to me is the colour choices... why green and purple? It's kind of... clashy. The hair reads kind of oddly to me as well, the lighting on it seems a little inconsistant with the rest of the piece. I think it'd be cooler with a lightsource coming more from the direction of the apple, and to the side, so not so much to the front? :/ It's hard to say.
Nice work with markers, by the way, it's so hard to get good highlights with those things. :3
Comments
VikingPancho Says:
Oh! This is cool! I love this characters design. The pose is amazing. Great job on this!
SasukexUchiha Says:
that is awsome.
Keylynn Says:
you improved the hand. Good.
Riot13O Says:
Gotta love it indeed. :3
Great stuff going on with the shading and the highlighting. The one thing I would add is that compared to the rest of the body, the face looks like it has much lighter shadows than the dark shadows on the body.
Yeah, the arm's all fixed up and lovely.
Great job though! How did you get that effect on the shirt, where the shadow kinda looks like a reddish gradient? I think it looks freakin' awesome.
MajKirai Says:
Ohh, she's got attitude. Love it! Nice pose and the tail is fabulous.
Luminance Says:
I am totally useless in the critique club for things that are not human~ o/~
DD We decided the body part looks a bit like a really buff drow and the head and tail are some sort of kickass dragonthing. 
I am so useless at composite anatomy. I really like the head and tail parts as a dragonthing though. 
Cool horns and cool tail.
I like the hands! They feel like they have a lot of strength gripping things (apple) which is really cool and something I can't do.
We just took turns covering either the body (leaving head and tail) or the head and tail, leaving only body.
Um~ Probably the weird thing to me is the colour choices... why green and purple? It's kind of... clashy. The hair reads kind of oddly to me as well, the lighting on it seems a little inconsistant with the rest of the piece. I think it'd be cooler with a lightsource coming more from the direction of the apple, and to the side, so not so much to the front? :/ It's hard to say.
Nice work with markers, by the way, it's so hard to get good highlights with those things. :3
zelink14 Says:
Yeah, I think the arm looks better. :) And I LOVE ThOSE HORNS, GAH. I like the values on the tail a lot. O.O
vivalavolcom321 Says:
wow thats great
i love her tail
JadeTheRaptor Says:
that is really awesome. im gona have ta watch ya
