Daddy's Little Girl

by SilverStorm

in Completed Works

Daddy's Little Girl

As father and daughter we grew apart,
The way the years grew longer.
I stopped holding your hand,
Only kissed you at night
And no longer needed your help.
Father I respected you,
And treasured you in my life,
But it wasn't the same.

Until one day something happened
And I felt so very alone.

Oh Daddy then you opened your arms
When tears fell from my eyes,
And held me close to tell me it was okay,
And I believed you,
The way I used to.
You told me it was alright
And somehow,
I knew you were right.
'Cause I'm still your little girl Daddy,
Your little girl who loves you so.

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Nov 28th 2004
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Ok so I suppose I had better submit something yes? Hmm anyway, this is the last piece of poetry I have written (about 2 weeks ago now). The story behind it is that I had my bag stolen in manchester and when I got home and told my Dad he just held me whilst I cried and this is what was later produced.

Love you Dad.

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IvySan Says:

OMG! I think I'm about to cry..this hits really close to home for me..This is beautiful! Wow..

Zoe the Bat Says:

Wow...how...touching. Gotta fave.

swurplekitty Says:

aww, horrible when you sort of forget how much things mean to you isn't it?

The other night I nearly cried 'cos my daddy didn't come and kiss me before he went to bed! How sad am I? I mean I'm 17 and I have to have my dad kiss me before I go to bed. Although he doens't kiss me no more, I always kiss him so eh...:( *hughug* Very...moving. :)

bacon Says:

I can relate to this muchly...Instant fav

Zaitou Says:

wow...very bueatiful. As every one elsse said this hits me close to home as well

DevilDemonKyrm Says:

It's sweet and sureal. I can relate to the poetry, so I think it strikes something into me. Well written Silver Storm.

Featherlove Says:

that made me tear up Great job!

Mifty Says:

Aww, I sometimes feel that way with my dad, like our relationship is faded.
You did I great job.

zjgameru Says:

Very touching. I haven't been giving my father a hug or kiss. For years that is. Not even my mother. =) Maby thats the missing part of my life. Nice text and fave for sure.