Wash Away My Sins

by sakurabutterfly329

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Wash Away My Sins

Wash away my sins
With soap and sponge
Did I not see this
Coming when it comes

Alone in light
Crowded in the dark
I wash my sins away
Alone and hurt

Did I ever see you
Standing alone as well
Did I ever say to you
Welcome to my hell

Bring back my yesterday
Tomorrow we'll share
Wash away this fantasy
I'm vulnerable and bare

Wash away my sins
With soap and sponge
Did I not see this
Coming when it comes

Am I really strong
Or is that just a role
Did we make it through
Or have I paid your toll

Help me wash this sanity
Off my raven slate
If you knew I loved you
This wouldn't be my fate

Wash away my sins
With soap and sponge
Did I not see you
When you came along
> 'Happy Thanksgiving!!!' by sakurabutterfly329
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Mature Nov 27th 2004
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Feeling.. sad.. dunno why.. this has nothing to do with anyone or anything.. I just.. got this overwhelming sense of inspiration for a picture.. and when I took the picture.. the poem came along.. so.. yeah..


Just so everyone knows, YES that is a Hello Kitty Soap Despenser, Yes I DO like Hello Kitty, and YES, My bathroom is decorated in Hello Kitty ** what can I say, she makes me uber happy lol also in the picture before I cropped it, a Hello Kitty Soap Dish, Hello Kitty Bandaids *from the saw incident* and a Hello Kitty Toothbrush Holder lol...
more information about my bathroom to scare the hello kitty out of you lol... hehehee

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AmesHerla Says:

Wow :/ This is very powerfull. I love the methodical flow. Excellent job. Feel happier soon =)

Malchitos Says:

yeah..pretty cool...especially the fourth verse about being bare...that part was especially inspired!

sterilized dirt Says:

*hugs tight*

galdas Says:

Wow, that's a great poem! You have a talent for writing!

Chickensgomoo Says:

Thats cool!