Do you hear....?

by Captain Kuro

in Completed Works

Do you hear....?

Said I to the person next to me
Do you see what I see?
Trapped in your misery next to me
Do you see what I see?
Some hope, a life
Living with a fight
With joy to make things right
With joy to make things right

Said the person next to me to another
Do you hear what I hear?
Ringing through my mind always, brother-
Do you hear what I hear?
A cry for help,
something that I lack
With a need to be loved back
With a need to be loved back

Said the brother to someone down and sad
Are you mad like I'm mad?
Oh, Someone down and sad,
Are you mad like I'm mad?
A drug, a drug
will make it all the right
and keep us up and happy through the night
and keep us up and happy through the night

Said someone sad to people down the street
do you know how I treat?
Peace and love to people down the street
do you know how I treat?
The killing, the voice
talking in my head
It will guide me where I'll be led
It will guide me where I'll be led

The one, the one
responsible for our lives
is each of us..do it right
> Rage

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Jan 30th 2007
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Based on the Christmas song "Do you hear what I hear"

Comments

terverius Says:

WOW!!!! This is pretty heavy! I like it. The last verse is a little disturbing, but OH so true!

RipfangDragon Says:

Congrats on the front page!

terverius Says:

Well...I suppose I could..but. I couldn't rhyme! DD

csiguylalala Says:

I knew it! you are good! Nice work!