English Assignment [POLAR]

by kitkitty

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English Assignment [POLAR]

The day knows,
Of nights cold blow..

A wolves eyes,
Reflect new born life..

A polar's cry,
To keep her baby alive..

Pawing softly,
Licking thoughtfully..

She blinks away the tears of sorrow,
Little cub wont be seeing tomorrow.
> Lie

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Jan 23rd 2007
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nature youth
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last poem for today guys i swear xD; we had to confide ourselves, or i did atleast, to two phrases per couplet.. (i dont know all my poetic illiteracey words yet, spare me!) and they must both rhyme.

my theme was obviously wild life, motherhood, new borns, and death.
the mood, is up to you.. but i pretty much saw "sad"
and yeah.

Comments

bubblesbyebye Says:

I love your poems :3

Yuna Uisce Says:

That's sad--but very heartfelt. Simple, but good. Nice job.

MonsteRockPunk Says:

Aww..Poor little Polor Bear Cub..I think your poem is short ,but to the point..Its also very sad, I like it.. -crys for the little cub- :'(