Leaf-Nin Rookie: chap 1

by GhostlyTofu

in Completed Works

Leaf-Nin Rookie: chap 1

'Hey Idaten, wait up!'
'huh?' Idaten looks behind him, Amber,the girl who likes him, is running after him. ' Oh hey Amber.'
'So, wanna walk to school together?'
'Uh, sure.' He barley takes two steps until he's at the academy.'Here we are.'
"Oh man! I thought i'd have atleast more time with him! DARNIT!" she thinks. Amber had liked Idaten the day she saw him. Idaten never new she excisted untill two days ago. Idaten was a tall, blonde,green eyed orphan. His family was killed off. His currenty foster family, the Takame's, have been taking care of him since he was two weeks old.
'I guess this is it,' said Amber,'I..uh..hope we are in a team together.'
'Yeah that would be cool, alright i'll see you later then.' Idaten said with a smile. Inside the academy there were many new students. In one room, Idaten took a seat and prepared for the worst. He didnt want to be a ninja at all. But his foster mom strongly forced him into it, saying 'Who's going to protect you when your older?'
-Amber walks into the room, and a huge smile shoots across her face as she sees Idaten sitting down.
'Hey Idaten!'
'Oh hey.'
'Is this seat taken?'she said with a bit of hope. She thought "Oh my gosh! Please say no!"
'No go right ahead.'
"Booya!! Allright!" she thought as she quickly sat down and glared at a guy who tried to sit on his left.
'Alright class, settle down. I'm Uziku-Sensei. Now----'he began "A huge speech isnt really neccesary right now." Idaten thought as he messed with a paper airplane. He tossed it up in the air when Uziku's back was turned, it glided around the room and flew right into the back of Uzuki's head. Amber giggled and Idaten tried not to laugh. He turned around quickly and glared at all the new students.
'Who ever threw that, plea--' another plane flew right passed him and out the door.
'Haha I get it, your jokers! Wanna be funny with me huh?'
'No sir, we're not jokers.' Idaten said trying to keep a straight face. Uziku stared at him.
'Please, sensei, continue.' He said, fighting back even more laughs.
--A few more weeks of this and it was time to divide into teams. Amber and Idaten both passed the test.
'Team one, Kuzu Laiko, Shiru Haru, and Misha Kaio.' This team was odd, it had a slacker, a very weak hardworker, and a very mean medic-nin.
'Team 5, Amber Maiko, Ryushinin Toushi, and Idaten Haikyou.'
"Alright! Booya!!!!" she thought as she smiled at Idaten who look at Ryushinin. Ryushinin was a very smart but introverted guy. He kept to himself but passed everything.
--At lunch, the team ate together. While Amber was talking about how they will use teamwork and tactics, Idaten was finishing his ramen.
'So...Ryushinin..how you doing?' She asked.
'Oh. You know, ok I guess.' He said sheepeshly.
'Ok?' Idaten says with his mouth full,'Come on, you passed all the test and are going to be a ninja. You should be happy right?'
'Well. I guess so.' Amber and Idaten drew a blank face.
--After lunch they headed back to the academy, to meet thier new sensei. Thier sensei was the tall and lanky Kuriko Mishouki. He was the newest Jounin.
'Alright team, lets get things straight,' he stares at Idaten 'dont mess around when i'm in charge alright? Cuz I dont want to have to kick your butt.' He said, still glaring at him.
'Why do you look at me? I'm an a plus student. In citizenship and acedemics.'
'Hahaha! Do you think i'm stupid? I've been watching you throw paper airplanes and pencils at your teachers for weeks.'
'Oh'
'Shut up and sit down.' This was the first time Idaten didnt have a witty comeback or a one liner. He just sat, trying his best to think up somthing. Amber and Ryushinin stared at him. The laughed.
'Ahahah! You got told!' They yelled.
'You two, zip it!'
'Sorry sir.' They whimpered.
'Now, let's get some training started......'

Authors Commentary:
This sucks. I didnt really know what I was doing at first, but later chaps will be a little more actioner..(if that's a word) and a little more, here it comes, romantic. Eep that was hard to say but I got it over with.
> 'Give a pirate a hug!' by GhostlyTofu

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Jan 13th 2007
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chap humor leaf-nin manga
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This is my funny fan fiction for my character, Idaten Haikyou and his journey through the ninja school. STIL WORKING ON TITLE.

Comments

Kibas Girl Says:

I think it's good^^ Nice and well put together! Great job!

x N a r u t a r d x Says:

it dosent suck

SweetPain Says:

This is great! You should be a writer!

Eiko Katserugi Says:

*searches for a second chapter* its not done is it?!?!?! T_T I like it!!

rareopaldragon Says:

OMG thats awesome.... You so got told!
*searches for her character* oh well... i dont need to be in it... i would just kill your character

Pyro Dragon Says:

That's cool, they're on a team and everything! I should make a story about my character sometime...

SasukexUchiha Says:

i think actioner is a word. -looks up in a huge dictionary- ah, here it is. bla bla bla. its pretty cool. LUVZ IT SO FARZ!

Triggster Says:

Kool! Thats not bad at all I will watch you, thats if you dont mind...

Nachos Says:

^-.-^ uber pwnage

sakurablossm512 Says:

ME LOVE THIS STORY!!!!