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Lost soul
Nothing is out there,
where am I?
I don't feel anything,
I feel like everything is gone.
My heart aches for anything,
it's so bad that brings tears to my eyes,
tears rolling down my cheeks,
and falling to the ground.
I isolate myself from what might come along,
I bury my face deep into my knees,
I don't know what to do anymore.
People try to make me happy,
but their smiles are soon denied as the omens come back to me.
I feel like it's all my fault,
they are all sad because I'm sad.
I can't deny those facts.
I hate it when I make people sad,
I hate it how I can't be happy all the time.
...I hate it how I can't get over it.
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Comments
jasaiyajin Says:
an old zen quote on happiness.... nvm, too cryptic... ill translate
nice poem
a connection severed in this world creates a hollow dimension or rift... the perception of that "missing" rift creates unhappiness or a hole.. from what once wuz, there is nothing, since the connection is severed, pain usually emerges...
connections lost in this world are what hurt... im losing myself again...
*hugs*
PokeyStix Says:
Yes, I hope you feel better soon.
DemonBunny Says:
Very expressive, contredicitive at points but it still has an amount of power to it to make someone whom hates poetry to give a good comment on it.
-BlackFox
Yunacat Says:
Aww... I hope you feel better. I really can't say anything more since i really don't know what's wrong.. so yeah...
( Oh, and i know the artist who created the pic you used as a cover.. D: )
TheLioness Says:
Some times i feel the exact same way. i get this poem.
Lilly Tagumi Says:
I know that image :3
just make sure to give proper credit... oh, and the poem is nice too. Hope you get to feelin better.
Not saying you stole, but so you can give proper credit, this is the actual person that made it.
http://pyromaniac.deviantart.com/
howlsawiz Says:
i feel like that the most of the time. people sometimes call me emo but i'm not, i dont like it when people put me into a catagory. life sucks and so does most of it's people. not you, of corse, your awsome. don't forget im here to talk if you need me. *huggles*
Perry Porcupine Says:
Hmmm I use that image on my other poem. But very nice poem you done there ^^
loony Says:
ahh, who hasn't felt like that from time to time? hope you feel better, dearie. beautiful work.
ANBUninjas Says: