Why do we want a feeling to stay?
If it's going to eventually go away
Why do I still feel lonely time to time?
When I know I'm not and everything is fine
Why do I feel empty even though I'm full?
Everything is becoming so dull
Is something missing?
Is something wrong?
Why do I bleed when there is no cut?
Something is wrong with me, but what?
I don't feel happy even though I should
If I knew what was wrong I would
Feeling this feeling I have never felt
Feeling unloved and alone
Why do I feel dead inside?
Why are my true feelings trying to hide?
Don't ask, I started feeling weird around 11:30-12:00P.M. or so.
It's like I was Depressed ,but I didn't know why. I just felt like writing
the feeling down of Total Emptieness
"Why do we want a feeling to stay?
If it's going to eventually go away
Why do I still feel lonely time to time?
When I know I'm not and everything is fine
Why do I feel empty even though I'm full?"
My fav. line from this.Love this.You are very talented when it comes to rythming.This is beautfiully written and thought out.I feel like that alot...><
Its a great poem, even if the meaning has a place in your life.
I recognize the feeling and I know a bit how you would have felt. But I hope for you and for everybody, you don't have to feel like that again. And if so I hope this far away from me will give you a bit comfort.
Comments
MonsteRockPunk Says:
Yes, I know I'm strange, but I'm not the only one so now I don't feel as bad..
Phaena Says:
Lovely poem, flows beautifully and the words are wisely choosen. All though it is also sad.
SilverShadowBlade Says:
And people think I'm sad..dunno why but I should draw you a pic of you all happy, not the other way around
Cheer up or I'll make you! >O 
"Why do we want a feeling to stay?
If it's going to eventually go away
Why do I still feel lonely time to time?
When I know I'm not and everything is fine
Why do I feel empty even though I'm full?"
My fav. line from this.Love this.You are very talented when it comes to rythming.This is beautfiully written and thought out.I feel like that alot...><
Fitos Says:
That is very good. I hate so say it, but there are not many poets here who can actually be called poets.
This is a fave... definately.
Harkimbo Says:
Its a great poem, even if the meaning has a place in your life.
from me will give you a bit comfort.
I recognize the feeling and I know a bit how you would have felt. But I hope for you and for everybody, you don't have to feel like that again. And if so I hope this far away
Jenny 4 Says:
I hope everything will be alright. ^^
Umie Says:
I second Rapture HalfaFoxgirl.
Pixelstx Says:
very cool!!!
Yuna Uisce Says:
We all experience stuff like that from time to time. It's natural.